concrit

too weird? not weird enough? inconsistent in some way?
alcor's from the game-version of devil survivor 2 rather than the anime,
please let me know if i'm overlooking something or portraying him in an non-endearing bizarre way.
(i can accommodate various routes as well, specifying just one feels odd..)

feel free to also use this post for plotting!

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